With great power comes great powerlessness.
I love the story so far and I love the style, it has a Vincent Van Gogh feel to it.
That's a great looking introductory page! It already makes me want to read more, before even knowing exactly what it's about.
The blue hue works really well to create a somewhat eerie and brooding atmosphere. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story takes us...
Really, you can't hear a better comment for an intro page than a reader saying they want to read more!
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